Wednesday, December 21, 2005

in-complete

And she stared at the monitor for a long long time after the last bb. The screen read any message you send may not be received by the other end. The person seems to be offline. After a three hour long conversation on the screen, he had to leave suddenly after a call from home, and he leaves. All of a sudden this silence on the screen is strange to Nisha. She looks around her room, stunned to be back. The milk by the telephone has gone cold. There is a heavy downpour outside. The slanting rain drops have moistened her bed. The loud noise made by the constant battering of rain drops on tin roofs is deafening. The curtains are ruffled of the constant wind. A sharp cold gust blows through the open windows. She feels the pang of cold on her bare arms. She hasn’t got a jacket on. She is hungry. And she feels alone.

It’s 1 at night. Her parents have long ago gone to bed.

Nisha shuts off the monitor and walks away from the computer. She sips the milk, stung by its coldness. The phone rings and she picks it up on the first ring. “Hello” her voice is softened by the surrounding silence...

Pls continue if you feel like.

19 comments:

Anonymous said...

you should complete this story! or tell us whom did story happen to!!

Anonymous said...

hmm... why should you tell us who did it happen to...cant it be a piece of your imagination... or can it be that it is something you saw... but why is it incomplete... because it dint happen to you ;-)

lucky you... you get, you lose...but you dont get your milk cold... :)) in case the milk gets cold you feed it to your white mouse...

:)
love,
anon

Anonymous said...

anon2, lets have her tell if it happened to her, if it happened by imagination, if it happened to you someone else, or if it happened to still someone else :-) why should we advice her on whether or not she should tell... let her, if she wishes to, let her not, if she wishes to not...;) i came all the way here to just see what she had to say...:)

and white mouse gets bad on get fed by cold milk! have you ever tried it?

:)
love,
anon1

zany said...

would you two stop this and study for your entru... my white mouse has just been rescued from a fretful day... and it loves warm milk ... not some cold curdy milk by some incomplete characters... n e ways, i think i will complete the story, now that the climax is near... ;)
take care.

zany said...

n those not studying entru, chill out!

Anonymous said...

anon1 and zanie..

funny you guys keeping checking the thread to this incomplete article... but i think zanie needs help to complete her story...hmm.. and perhaps my help is crucial :))

the climax is here for sure... and now lets see how the chips fall..

she walks up to the open window, throws the milk out of the window, closes the window, walks to her monitor, picks it up, walks to the window again ;-) opens it ... decides not to throw the monitor... the traces of milk in the wet ground wouldnt be visible in the morning... the monitor would be terribly missed and her parents would wake up too... so she instead gets back to the phone which she had put on hold... and talks to her best friend... she says... i know i have been crazy... but i am allowed to be... but so long...not any more... i am waiting for sun to come now... :) sun you know... (incidentally nisha means night in HINDI...) hmm...

lots and lots of love to the white mouse, lil love to you and anon1 ,
anon2

Anonymous said...

anon2 and zanie!!

this indeed was an interesting story. good for the monitor that she didnt hear the deafening THUD that closely!! :))

but throwing milk out of the window because no one is seeing... bad civic manners... hmmmm... :>

btw, sun comes and nisha goes! how come do sun and nisha have such a relationship? can we think of any other analogy? :D... but i hope sun comes. nisha is waiting, afterall... otherwise we'll all have to wait more for the closing announcements to happen :))

but that was just a ramble...:d

uh... as if others have meaning...:))

although one unsolicitated advice remains... zanie, you should tell nisha she should continue to be crazy, in some way or the other. she would be crazy to continue to be crazy on a few things, as she put up to you. but, she would be crazy to not be crazy at anything :)

peace, laughter, love and bliss,
anon1

zany said...

both of u if u are two...n both of u if u r one, are crazy. stop posting as anon...anon 1, anon 2... what the heck...u visibles?

Anonymous said...

how come zanie, you think anon1 and anon2 are the same ppl :P :> :))

i think zanie, anon1 and anon2 are all the same... :))

so that means, i am zanie...and i am anon1 and i am anon2... someone told nisha to continue to be crazy... did some one mean anon1 is crazy or anon2 is crazy or zanie is crazy... or is rambling crazy... :))

anycase...find out for yourself each of you :P

love,
anon2

Anonymous said...

zanie, you are naughty haa! you, anon1 and anon2 are all the same!!?? :o :o :))
anon2, you are naughty too! you, zanie and anon1 are all the same!!?? :o :o :))
anon1, you are... uh... well...

ok. given zanie wants visibles, atleast lets reveal identities... anon2, you start! :D


love,
anon1

Anonymous said...

hmm... well i know who anon1 is ...well zanie still insists that it is me who is anon1 and anon2. she says... look at the smileys, they are the same :P , look at the words they are the same...the style... :)) zanie is sooo innocent...but at least she knows who the one anon is...she doesnt only know that I am anon 2. well so , she doesnt know who anon1 is? so anon1 you tell who you are...well i sure know you, but given anonimity is a right, i wouldnt like to ruffle with you...given you are an international visitor to Nepali blogs ;-)... now tell me if i am not a smart anon2...by the way anon 2 .... i think you know me too...and are we just trying to find different platforms to communicate under the cover of anonimity :)) but one thing... we can stay the way we are..and soon stop treading each others toes.. :) :P ;)

zanie....has your exam finished...you were talking of entru..what is entru btw..:)) he he now zanie...who do you think i am...:)) by the way how many people do you think visit your blog...and more, read it...and then read comments and then leave their footprints...well anonymous thought it might be...

:)

love,
anon2
(this is simpler than my name...:P, so i am one step in revealing myself..:> what say you anon 1)

Anonymous said...

anon2, you arent dumb! you prove it :-))

*khush hoo jaao*

:))
:))
:))

zanie says anon1 and anon2 are the same!

hmmm...
:">
hmmm...

:>
:))
:))

and then zany was made zanie!! :))

anon2 - now i think you know for sure. i obviously knew from ages who anon2 was! obviously!!! and as far as different platforms to communicate, and treading each others toes are concerned, well... firstly its sad we have to call it so... secondly, only you arent entitled for it... and thirdly, you were sorry for not letting me normal, if i may... you remember, right? :> :D :))

btw, zanie, you are one really really sweet one...:D

but zanie, i think its so easy to guess! :))

btw, even i have this question :o... what was entru? and btw, what is this "international visitor" stuff? :> :p :)):))

love,
anon2
(this is simpler than my name...:P, so i am one (actually many) step/s in revealing myself..:> what say you anon2? now your chance to do the honors!)

Anonymous said...

hey hey hey!

sorry sorry..

thinking of anon2, i signed as anon2 :)) i am actually anon1!! :))

anon2 and zanie, over to you :D

love,
anon1

Anonymous said...

btw btw btw!

sorry for this spam!

i forgot to mention to anon2 -- i wasnt here to tread on your toes. i was here when i saw zanie doing uncharacteristic things, and wrote in for her... you just happened, ok :D

but then, that you happened, treading also happened... thats, you know, natural, right :))

zanie zanie! hope you are super duper!

love,
anon1

zany said...

omg...omg..omg...
wow...
wait a min, m i making history on my blog??? chill man!
wots the matter with you two? this is a blog? hello?
hello..hello??

hi int'l visitor it's nice talking to you under anonymity. HELLO!!

n the national visitor, who is soon turning into the former kind - STOP THIS...
15 Comments... r u crazy? this wud b a blogger's DCT - dream come true...but ...

god!
at least use different articles... not the same story man!
i am out of words...

what exactly r u two doing?
anonymity? think.

and thank you. this was great. really. i love crazy ideas - one of the anons cud tell that, now, which one is it, i get confused.

Anonymous said...

why is this fun...

its like..Mc donald's :I am loving it!!

its like...fun..

entru is Entrepreneurship...entru in class room :))

anon1 ... i want to be good and stop annoying you in any way... stop doing all that i do... and come in your way :)

i mean good you know... i dont know if you dint like treading analogy... but i sure dont want to tread on your toes.... yes be normal ..have fun , jump aruond..one more secret...zanie...must also think you are super duper... like anon2 thought... hmm thinks still.. ;-)

hmm... as long as it was..it was mc donalds ... now it is no more fast food....it is the simple ghar kaa khana... poha ;-) not wada..

love,
peace,
and anonimity

anon2

Anonymous said...

ZaNiE! HELLO!!

when you are making history, you dont chill, you go on and make history! :))

and what exactly are we two doing -- well... hmmm... you now see what happens when YOU get confused on who's who, and YOU say anon1 = anon2 :o :D... atleast this time, dont scold me the way you did once, ok? :D:D and haan, it didnt start to be this... i first wrote casually... and second time i wrote, i knew who was in the loop... as usual, it happened... naturally...

anon2 -- who said you are annoying me? no way! as for fast food vs ghar kaa khaana, you know how much i long for it, right? and poha... reminding that is annoying... any case, wait a sec... yummmmmmmmmm...;):D but then, life's been loads of mirages, too... or perhaps it isnt... maybe... i dont really know...

but then, within mirages, anonimity, crazy.full.ness, international distances, DCT/DCF dilemmas, we manage to be connected... seamlessly... even anonymously... what else does one want from life!? but then, God must be crazy!! :D so we should be allowed to, right?? :D or... is it really being crazy at all? or... is it crazy to not be crazy!!??

any case, like anonimity is a right, and one might not ruffle with it, so is choice. whatever.

but haan, anon2, you gotta get back on what you last said non-anonymously... hai naa? and you know what i wanted to hear, nah? :D

and zanie dear, next comment on another mesg, ok? :D

love,
anon1

Anonymous said...

if zanie would promise that she wont kill me... i would like to get on to the next thread in the next blog..in the next comment...as the next anonymous..

anon1: am i not letting go by doing this? serious question...

Anonymous said...

anon2 - i dont really get you. what do you wish to let go?

incidentally, i remember "letting go" once a few months back. that was for being sensitive! and you know the person just...

so now, i shall be standing all the way till the other person goes... stand calm, and quite, and hehe anonymous... well, mostly...;)

love,
anon1